November 2, 2009
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1. Flowers, grass, trees, rain
as the puddles ripple
happiness of SPRING

2. Splash about in the lake
sun burns down, radiating
warmth flows around us

3. Leaves are different
yellow, orange, red, wild dance
weather chills, prepare

4. Trees become bare, die
the snow falls coldly outside
lakes and rivers freeze

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warriorsfan711 said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 9:58 am
Wonderful Haiku Not Exactly 5 7 5 but goo job =)
gnihtlaicositna This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 8:22 pm
Oops, you're right.
This isn't the original poem I did for school :P
When I was posting on here I mistakenly changed a few words, forgetting it would mess up the whole poem. Oh well.
Thank you though :)
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