Don't Break It

October 27, 2009

. This is my heart.
. Be careful, it's fragile .
. Try not to break it.


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MendTheBrokenx3 said...
May 1, 2011 at 3:31 pm

I Have Written A Haiku Myself. c:

I Believe Your Haiku Is Much Better Though.

When You Can, Can You Please Check Out My Poems..? :D

BrittieVee said...
Dec. 31, 2010 at 12:33 pm

i like this poem alot actually..

although i feel as if i read it before, i dont think its original.

xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Aug. 31, 2010 at 5:45 pm
this is really creative. i really like itt!
Patience97 said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 12:35 am
Nice poem. I like your writing style and the way you set it up was captivating... made you think
theblackcrayon said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 2:12 pm
I think this haiku is really sweet (or bittersweet) and gets the reader straight to the point, but a haiku goes first line: five syllables, second line: seven syllables, third line: five syllables. In your first line, you wrote four. I'm sure it was an honest mistake and does not take away from the beauty of this poem. Keep writing!
BleedingRose said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 9:51 pm
Short, sweet, and to the point does not cover this. It's more like little, bittersweet, and significant, which is much better. I love it, keep writing! :-)
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