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Dark clouds cover sun
You hear deep roar of thunder
You smell rain in air

Cool breeze touches flesh
Water falls from the Heavens
Feels like time is still

So beautiful rain is
Watching ripples in puddles
Rain, peaceful beauty



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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 2:02 pm:
I could feel the raindrops on my skin when reading this poem. You really appealed to the senses~
 
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Houf_pooooferly said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 11:44 am:
This was an interesting poem. I felt like there was too much description.
 
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gonzaleztd This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 8:27 am:
This is beautiful! Makes me wanna dance in the rain! :)
 
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selenafan1 said...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 4:42 pm:
I really liked this im having trouble with haikus i hav to do one for math cuz i just do freeverse HELP
 
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EricForman said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:26 pm:
The imagery is truly amazing. Its like it is actually real.
 
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minecrafter said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 12:22 pm:
Beautiful, truely beautiful, very discriptive.
 
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nikkigonefishinThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:40 am:
I LOVE the rain!
 
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...BeTheLight...This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 8:29 pm:
Nice work!! :] that was very very pretty! beautiful imagery
 
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BlindSamurai said...
Sept. 12, 2010 at 5:30 pm:

Beautifully composed, really good work.

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annika_katryn said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 7:10 pm:
the imagery was beautiful, and came across so well. i could see it, feel it, taste it. thank you :)
 
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marykate said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 12:08 pm:
Great job! The middle haiku was my fav but all of it was very good.
 
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TheOcherousRodentia said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:51 am:
One word. Lovely! Great Job! Keep up the good work.
 
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munkyman95 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 4:49 am:
Nice, elegant control to get your message through in a strict style without becoming awkward
 
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mrs.Mickey Mouse said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 2:13 pm:
Cristobal i really like your poem more than any other i have read i also write poems too. good work by the way.
 
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