Come and Go

October 10, 2009
By Katie Trudeau SILVER, Saranac Lake, New York
Katie Trudeau SILVER, Saranac Lake, New York
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I can’t say how much
I miss you. Weight of my heart
Would crash the phone lines


Haikus heal a lonely friend



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on Jul. 6 2014 at 7:21 pm
Bronwyn-Sophronia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
316 articles 10 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

This was beautiful, I love how descriptive you are even in those short lines, keep up the great work! CX

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:51 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

haha, it was supposed to be in Haiku format, that comment, Ah well TeenInk.comment editor you suck..but maybe you can tell the way I meant it to be ,, Anyway LOVED it!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 1:50 pm
SaphiraBrightscales DIAMOND, Islamabad, Other
75 articles 16 photos 1143 comments

Favorite Quote:
I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
- Maya Angelou
When i was little/I used to point a chubby finger toward the dark sky/And ask my father/why some stars moved and others didn’t/He would laugh and explain that some were airplanes/I still wish on them today ~ Laugh-It-Out
The feathers of a crow are black/The ink of my pen is blacker/The pain of my heart is blackest~ Mckay
If love produced a blossom/I’d take it in my palm/What a blessing, the bright color!/How soothing, such a balm!/I’d keep a petal for my own/The rest, drop from my hands/For such a flower would multiply/And populate the lands~ thesilentraven
And I began to rival legends/Long entombed before my birth./But for all my much envied fame/The lust for more would not abate./The plaques and prizes with my name/Will, like all things, disintegrate. ~ TheEpic95 now known as Helena_Noel

I can't say how much  I liked these few words that you Put so beautfiully               "Yes, Haikus heal a lonely friend"

on Aug. 16 2010 at 6:36 pm
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

i love this. it so full of emotion with only three lines. great job. keep writing, Mel :) and i would love to hear what you have to say about some of my work!!

on Jun. 9 2010 at 6:30 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I loved it, very unique.  I think you might like my haiku, Purple Love, check it out.  You don't have to comment, and BTW, totally agree with your last line.

-Rose


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on May. 17 2010 at 11:22 pm
zweetz3k9 GOLD, Stone Mountain, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"we're human beings being human"

beautiful.


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