Torture

Throw me into a bath of acid
Then you might be able to compete with what the others have done
I have been electricuted
I have been stretched
I have been cut but not by myself
Almost ripped limb from limb
Now that wouldn't be fun,
Now owuld it?
If I had been ripped limb from limb I wouldn't be here for you to torture
Love Me
Hate Me
Kill Me
I won't care
I can't feel any pain or emotion for others now
Go ahead
Torture me as you please





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bohemian_teen said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 8:45 pm
Superbly written, fabulously expressive, and incredibly dark... Love it!! =)
 
Geisbengals said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 12:15 pm
I love this poem its amazing, most poems are born bcuz some one got bored. Keep it up Dont ever let any ones opinion put u down its all about wat u feel for the poem
 
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