When Blood Runs Cold

Interesting challenge. Successful victory with this. Great poem.

Very interesting writing, good job!

this was amazing

Wow, very amazing and definitely unique!  I loved it, especially your descriptions!  This is great, and well thought out, you're very talented!  Would you mind commenting on some of my work?  Thanks!  Keep writing!

-Rose

i really like this. it's unique. u can paint a picture in ur mind vividly because of ur creative descriptionz. gr8 job

This is a very diffrent type of Haiku. I like the descriptive words the writer uses like smoldering barrel to represent a gun fire. It helps the reader picture the scene. Also the descriptive words help the reader paint a picture of how the Texas Ranger. over all the poem was descriptive and exciting to read!

Woahhh;;
this is crazy good:)
keep it up.

This was a different kind of haiku or that i've read good job!