October 3, 2009
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big long tree standing
alone in the woods standing

with the wind blowing

leaves falling down
swirling in the wind around
leaving the tree there

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AdamsonD said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 9:38 pm
I loved this piece. It was so descriptive for six lines; I love how you describe the lone tree standing in the woods. I think it is sad how the leaves leave the tree but glorious in a way. Over all I love this piece.
kknapp said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 5:32 pm
i enjoyed this peace. If this poem is about you or some one you know, i'd imagine it means that your life is moving on around you like its going too fast. It could also mean you feel alone but really if you just look around you'll find atleast one good friend that will always be there for you.
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 4:49 pm
Amazing. I like how the first and second line of the second part rhyme. It's very pretty.
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