My Rockstar

September 28, 2009
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Brown, chocolatey eyes,
Voice to take your breath away,
That boy's my rockstar.

Or he used to be,
I guess I was just dreaming,
And now he's just gone.

I took things too fast,
Told him what was in my heart,
And scared him away.





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timeformetofly7 said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 6:00 pm

aww...

 

That was really good though, Great Job!!! :) Keep it smiling

 
Miamicutie13 said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 5:40 pm
Wow that so deep! I think you will write great things in the future
 
KaitE said...
Nov. 9, 2009 at 6:43 am
Nice work keep it up.
 
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 4:48 pm
Very nice. It's a very unique haiku, since haikus usually deal with nature. I liked it a lot.
 
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 9:47 am
Not bad, accually really good. Very creative and deep. 5 Stars!
 
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