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Striking rapidly
Thunders wicked companion
Lighting up nights sky

Crooked arks with sparks
Silently peaceful warning
Gods bowling tonight

Unfrightening light
Outshining even the stars
Exploding from clouds

Splitting trees in half
Postponing all outdoor sports
Beauty lighting night




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gabbru said...
May 15, 2012 at 8:07 am:
I like this Haiku about lightning! All of the stanzas fit well together and you used very good describtive words. Nice job!(:
 
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Alina R. said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 1:25 pm:
i like your poem because it make me laugh its a little bit funny i like the part when it says "gods bowling tonight"
 
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antmlover said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 5:23 pm:

great peom

 

 
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LilEd said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 3:45 pm:
Nice poem!!! Its really describtive!!
 
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BleedingRose said...
Nov. 12, 2010 at 9:57 am:

I really love this, lightning storms are absolutely amazing and so is this striking poem, great work.  I love the bit of humor in there also, witht the 'gods are bowling line.'  Another fave is 'thunder's wicked companion.'  I luvs it!

Would you mind commenting on some of my work or just checking it out?  Thanks!

-Rose

 
Katrap replied...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 9:13 pm :
Sure & Thanks for the positive feedback, I appreciate it.
 
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Grasshopper007 said...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 4:43 pm:
um... this is haiku?
 
Katrap replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 9:05 pm :
Yes it's a haiku. It has the 5, 7, 5 sylables pattern
 
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alvina said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 7:28 pm:
this is awsome i love it. like they said its very discriptive and vivid and i think its just plain amazing and wow XD
 
Katrap replied...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 7:37 pm :
Thank's so much.
 
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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 2:44 pm:
wow i really <3 this. so descriptive & set into such a vivid perspective. very powerful also. awesome job. keep writing!
 
Katrap replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 4:52 pm :
I will :D thanks, glad you liked it.
 
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halls said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 6:27 pm:
This piece is amazing. It is so vivid and discriptive. As I read this it put a mind blowing images in my head. I really like when you say exploding from the clouds splitting tears in half, those are my favorite two lines. Also the picture gose along amazingly in every way.
 
Katrap replied...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 7:48 pm :
Thank you. I think Lightning is beautiful but powerful, and I tried to put those together in my writing. The imagery of it just came together as I was writing.
 
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