Snow Day

September 25, 2009
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Purely white glisten
Crystal flakes of frozen rain
No two are alike

Winter weather joy
An angles wings can take flight
Men of spheres delight

Snowy fun filled flight
Lighting the dark dreary night
Schools canceled today

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kvater said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:23 pm
i really lliked this poem its short and simple :)
shizuka said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 9:08 pm
i like where it says "Schools canceled today" :)
pnkninja11 said...
Jan. 5, 2011 at 7:25 am
I like this poem. It reminds me of winter. And it also brings me back to the good old days. Back when I used to play outside in the snow and still believed in Christmas.
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 5:26 pm
luvvv this.we had like a 3-day snow day recently where i live. completely agree. its beautiful...til it got 2 like 24 inchez;) awesome job
Imagination! said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 4:29 am
i love this, we've just had a weeks worth of snow days not long ago, and i totlayy agree the snow is beautiful - especially when it is untouched.
Imagination! replied...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 4:30 am
* totally.
Katrap replied...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 8:09 pm
I completely agree.
Kingsfan0121 said...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 8:37 am
I also love snowdays, and I like how you looked past just a day off, and took it to the extent of looking at the true beauty of nature at that time.
Katrap replied...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 6:10 pm
Thank you :D Snow is beautiful.
colliganc said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 7:06 pm
Great poem, I like how you describe that no two snow flakes are alike. It makes me think of people and how everyone is different in their own way. Everyone has his or her own identity being their key to life. When people are themselves and not who others want them to be they show creativity like a glistening white snowflake, which is extraordinary if looked at closely. I also like how you describe winter being " Snowy fun filled flight". Winter is an amazing time of year. Winter is fun... (more »)
Katrap replied...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 1:13 pm
Thank you. :D I appreciate the feedback.
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Oct. 14, 2009 at 4:50 pm
Absolutely captivating! This is so beautiful.
Katrap replied...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 8:53 pm
Thank you. :D
96hammy said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 10:01 pm
I totally wish that would happen! it would be AWESOME!!!!!! i love the snow's beauty like in that picture above.
Katrap replied...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 10:12 pm
I know right. :D
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