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A wild stallion runs
as free as can be throughout
his mighty meadow

symbol of freedom
the meadow is his peace
running and roaming.




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brianj said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 10:01 am:
I love the image you've painted in my mind of a stallion running through a meadow! Great topic! I think it would be a perfecy oppurtunity if you'd turn this into a longer poem so that you could describe the stallion even more. Nice work! :)
 
halls replied...
Oct. 18, 2009 at 2:16 pm :
thank you so much
 
Katrap replied...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 5:13 pm :
I agree, you should make this poem longer. It's good. :]
 
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