My Task

By JenniferB., Harvey, LA

A star rises east.
The sight of sun wakens me.
New start of journey.

Shining light speaks out.
What's your task for your siblings?
It lies in your hands.

We will go away.
So wisely take on your tasks
Before it's too late.

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IamtheshyStargirl said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 12:11 pm:

I can't stand it when people don't count syllables, and call their poems as haikus. Apparently, you can't stand it either :)

I really like your message, it gives people responsibility and power at the same time.

JenniferB. replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:33 pm :

thankyou very much for your agreement and likeness :=)

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sasssgirrrl22 said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:01 pm:

i like this alott! it kinda has it's own lesson 2 it, which i think is rele kewl. u dont see a whole lot of them. this is really gr8 plz keep writingg!:D

JenniferB. replied...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 9:30 pm :

Thankyou alot for your comment

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Boosflash said...
May 11, 2010 at 4:21 pm:

I like that-it sounds like you were talking to the reader then you got up and walked away-very nice. 5 stars captain.

JenniferB. replied...
May 23, 2010 at 7:30 pm :

thanks for your reply, I really appreciate it