clowns

0___________________________o Well... .....That just increased my clownophobia by tenfold....

Strange and intreguing poem. Funny yet scary all the same!

it not even haiku

This poem was creepy, but i like it. I like this poem because the tone and mood. The tone is creepy, because in lines 4 and 5 it says," Just rip out your tongue/ and hang you by your hair." The mood is scary, because it says," Just rip out your tongue".(4) The only suggestion I have is not repeating they will not eat you.

haha thats scary but it made me laugh(:

Good job and scared me and made me laugh at the same time!

This is freaky, funny, fresh, and just plain good! I loved it, it made me smile, because I like to say stuff like that! Mind commenting on some of my work? Thx1
-Rose

that is kind of freaky love it

HEY!
DONT MAKE ME EVEN MORE SCARED OF CLOWNS!

This poem is quite unique, interesting, and different. I like how you use that picture with all the teeth all over and how you say clowns will not eat you. The ending is scary and violent. This would absolutely make children scared of clowns.

that clown needs to get an makeover