September 24, 2009
clowns will not eat you
they will not eat you
just rip out your tongue
and hang you by your hair

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XxInsaneSmileyxX said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 8:59 pm
0___________________________o Well... .....That just increased my clownophobia by tenfold....
Dolly9471 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 1:57 pm
Strange and intreguing poem. Funny yet scary all the same!
juggalohomie said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 1:18 pm
it not even haiku
JuJu said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 3:24 pm
This poem was creepy, but i like it. I like this poem because the tone and mood. The tone is creepy, because in lines 4 and 5 it says," Just rip out your tongue/ and hang you by your hair." The mood is scary, because it says," Just rip out your tongue".(4) The only suggestion I have is not repeating they will not eat you.
pinkypromise23 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 9, 2010 at 1:21 pm
haha thats scary but it made me laugh(:
Eric D. said...
Apr. 30, 2010 at 9:30 am
scary but good
RadLeY said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:00 am
Good job and scared me and made me laugh at the same time!
BleedingRose said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 10:54 am
This is freaky, funny, fresh, and just plain good! I loved it, it made me smile, because I like to say stuff like that! Mind commenting on some of my work? Thx1
jesusluvsus said...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 1:50 pm
that is kind of freaky love it
hawkfire said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 3:17 pm
halls said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 7:41 pm
This poem is quite unique, interesting, and different. I like how you use that picture with all the teeth all over and how you say clowns will not eat you. The ending is scary and violent. This would absolutely make children scared of clowns.
ken5567734 said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 10:24 am
that clown needs to get an makeover
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