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September 24, 2009
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splash
cool water
refreshing
h2o
runs
flows
dribbles
down
a stream
a brook
a lake
the ocean
colorless
odorless
tasteless

splish
warm water
relaxing
melts
soothes
swims
down
a stream
a brook
a lake
the ocean
colorless
odorless
tasteless


shh........





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Earth2Kelskels said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 9:09 am

I loved this!

I really liked how it flows when you read it, just like water!

 
BriannaM. said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 9:37 pm
one word: wow!
 
TheOcherousRodentia said...
Aug. 5, 2010 at 10:30 pm
Just Beautiful.
 
Lexaaa replied...
Aug. 6, 2010 at 3:52 pm
Thanks so much :)
 
sasssgirrrl22 said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 5:36 pm
this is so kOoL. gr8 repetition
 
Talia♥ replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 5:39 pm
Ha ha, thanks! It wasn't supposed to be in the Haiku section, but they must have put it there by mistake! Oh well! And also the name was supposed to be different I think I had changed a different poem to this one right before I sent it in and forgot to change the name.... thanks for reading it anyways!
 
sasssgirrrl22 replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 7:28 pm
sure anytime. I luv readin poemz & ur really good sooo ya :P i submitted alot of poemz also, so it'd b gr8 if u could read some when they get on here :)
 
Talia♥ replied...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 7:36 pm
Sure! I'd love to! And thanks so much!!! :)
 
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 14, 2009 at 4:52 pm
Love it! Great use of repetition. Keep writing. This is amazing.
 
Talia♥ replied...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 7:19 am
Thanks so much! I actually wrote this a little over a year ago so I think I've matured more and I've become a better writer. I'll be posting more stuff soon!
 
Kota21 said...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 8:26 am
ok there are many things i liked abouth this poem it was very descriptive and i really could image some of the thing u were saying i also liked the shhh part of how it ended it was cool and also i m doing this for a school thingy so yeeah i didnt like how i got confused to much
 
CrazyPencilGirl replied...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 4:33 pm
thanks! i was inspired by like water reflecting with da sun to make a rainbow thing
 
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