Seven little men

September 19, 2009
Seven little men
Four went inside of the pen
none came back again

(ok teen ink said I had to enter an article at least a hundred characters long so i'm typing this to make it longer)

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dakotawright said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 11:09 am

Great Imagery! I saw the seven dwarfs when I read this for some reason.


jmurph said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:21 pm
Didnt really understand it, but nice job and thanks for making me laugh :)
Thibodeau said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 12:38 pm
This was nice, it made me laugh haha
in a serious way though, i appreciate it
ethanest said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 7:50 am
THat was GENOUS! You should be a poetic, or whatever they are called. The ending really reflected you as an author, the part in the parenthesis. Once again, BRILLANT!
Humming_Bird replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 8:13 am
I got into a Haiku kick and it popped into my head
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