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Will it calm again?

September 13, 2009
By Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
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The water Ripples
Its reflection is blemished
It will calm again

A mirror shatters
Its reflectoin is destroyed
It won't calm again

A life changes course
Its reflection confusing
will it calm again?



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on Nov. 2 2009 at 1:48 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Awesome IT has a lot of meaning you can group Haiku together it's way cooler if you do 'cause each can be a separate work or pair them up and mix it around it gives the reader more to think about and makes them relate it to their own lives. I personally like this a lot & it is defiantly not a bust!

on Oct. 21 2009 at 1:59 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

oh also check out some of my work if you could, i would REALLY aprreciate your opinion :) keep writing!

on Oct. 21 2009 at 1:58 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

whoa! this is a short poem, but it has deep content and it leaves us a lot to think about :) i like how you tried to reassure yourself 'it will calm again' then you became negative, 'it won't calm again' then you asked the question. it's very creative, and it really adds to the poem :) LOVE IT!!! 5 stars :)

DW SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 4:23 pm
DW SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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omg me too!!

Tybalt SILVER said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:32 pm
Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
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I don't know what that means.

tatsu said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:17 pm
this made me think about the chaos in are little plant.

Tybalt SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 9:59 pm
Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
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Thanks a lot! I love ratings and comments.

DW SILVER said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 7:25 pm
DW SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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Well i think its awesome!

on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:24 pm
Backfoot_Trevor SILVER, Acworth, Georgia
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this is really good.

very thought provoking.

Tybalt SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 4:42 pm
Tybalt SILVER, Coral Springs, Florida
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Thanks a lot. It was my seccond post and i was worried that it was going to be a bust. I had to write it a few years ago and decided to post it just for fun.

DW SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 4:21 pm
DW SILVER, Denver, Colorado
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O...m...g!!!! I love it!!!!!! It's so creative!!! I love haikus! Its so simple, yet so powerful! And I love the pic u chose for it! Awesome job!


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