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the wind twirls
and whirls behine me
i keep on walking
i fall to the ground with a crash
and a big bash
i stand up and find out
im at the end





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weaselkiesel said...
Jan. 25, 2011 at 12:23 pm
this is not the proper format for a haiku! its a nice poem, but it is not a haiku
 
Mni-meg said...
May 30, 2010 at 2:24 pm

Wow...this is awesome....

You are very very creative.

 
Thrush said...
Feb. 7, 2010 at 10:20 am
This is really great. It's about how some people you end up wasting your life away. Very great.
 
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:34 pm
this is great! so much emotion, and i like how it flowed together :) it's very creative and very good! nice job :) check out some of my work if you could, i would LOVE your feedback!
 
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