Interruption

September 3, 2009
By zirillim BRONZE, Schoharie, New York
zirillim BRONZE, Schoharie, New York
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Fear has no meaning
It interrupts my feelings
disintegrates thought.























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The author's comments:
Childhood fear of dark.

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Eilleen said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 1:06 pm
Eilleen, Saskatoon, Other
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great poem...it's eay to relae to for many since a lot of people were scared of the dark or somehing else when they were little.

ellie315 GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2010 at 10:25 pm
ellie315 GOLD, South Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
"And this, our life, exempt from public haunt, finds tongues in trees, books in the running brooks, sermons in stones, and good in everything." -- William Shakespeare

It is hard to write a haiku and express a ton of emotion, considering you have three lines and 17 syllables, but this is really deep and powerful. good job!!

ashaaley said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:47 am
ashaaley, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late to be what you might have been

I love this its so cute, and expresses how you feel aboiut the subject in 3 lines, goood jobb♥

on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:43 pm
Alyssa(: PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when their right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust noone but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."
— Marilyn Monroe

I love this! Everyones right...it flows well.

on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:35 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

whoa! short, simple and yet a deep, amazing meaning :) i like it! :) check out some of my work, i love the feedback :)

on Sep. 22 2009 at 8:29 am
munkyman95 GOLD, Medway, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I will become, what I know I am' Michael Jordan

very nice, short simple and true, flows well


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