Fear has no meaning
It interrupts my feelings
disintegrates thought.
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It interrupts my feelings
disintegrates thought.
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great poem...it's eay to relae to for many since a lot of people were scared of the dark or somehing else when they were little.
ellie315
It is hard to write a haiku and express a ton of emotion, considering you have three lines and 17 syllables, but this is really deep and powerful. good job!!
ashaaleyI love this its so cute, and expresses how you feel aboiut the subject in 3 lines, goood jobb♥
Alyssa(:I love this! Everyones right...it flows well.
dreamer_believer
whoa! short, simple and yet a deep, amazing meaning :) i like it! :) check out some of my work, i love the feedback :)
munkyman95very nice, short simple and true, flows well
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