True Best Friend

By , Union City, TN
Do you ever feel ,
Like somehow,
You lost your true best friend?

I feel this way,
I am feeling very empty,
And very much alone,
I am wishing,
I had a new true best friend,
Someone who would choose me,
For a true best friend.

Sagie is this way too,
Sagie is wishing,
Her family never moved,
To North Carolina,
Wishing he could move back today
to be with his old fiends.

There are lots of good ways,
To choose a friend,
But sometimes,
Friendship just happens.





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dragonfly95 said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 9:34 am
the ideas great...dont know why its under haiku though, keep it up.
 
Bryce said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 9:42 am
Yeah well I like the poem...dont hate
 
jrose said...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 8:51 am
wow this a great poem
 
Jane_P This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 5:49 pm
I don't know why this is under the haiku section...but it's a nice poem. Keep up the work, but make sure to brush up on classification.
 
Danman48 said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 11:51 am
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Holly D. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 6:13 pm
This poem sounds very...elementary. It's a good idea, but the word choice is very simple, and when you have a simple poem structure, you cannot have simple word choice too. Try to evoke more emotion from the audience. Since you want them to relate to you, try to make them feel sad.
 
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