A Horse's Run

September 8, 2009
As I run, feel strong
Wind amongst my long sleek mane
I'm walking on air

I feel like I'm flying
High up in our sky. It's
Like lying on a cloud

Now it's time to stop
My family is waiting for my return
I shall run to my home

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sarahconway This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 10:35 am
I like this, I really do, but it isn't a haiku.  Just thought I would let you know.
Amberocks:) replied...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 4:53 pm
its true its not but its still good. even if its not 5 7 5
Alyssa(: said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 5:47 pm
Love it! Good secret description. I like it:)!
Katrap said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 5:03 pm
Nice. I can picture the horse running. Is it wild, or tame?
DragonMaster66.6 replied...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 10:38 am
neither, it's a poem
Elena Lee R. said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 2:21 pm
I loved this poem. Is it about horses? i also liked the pciure that goes with it. Is it about a horse?
halls said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 7:25 pm
I love how the way the horse is discribed running
blank said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 9:04 pm
i love this story it is the best
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