A stormy Night

September 8, 2009
By , Lubbock, TX
A Stormy Night
Lightning lights the sky
Locked in my room terrified
Thunder rolls on by

Looking out window
Terrified of what comes next
Wish for good night sleep

Dawn slowly rises
The country air blows softly
And brings with it spring

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Yld777 said...
Feb. 21 at 7:33 am
nice one !!!!!!111
NoniDoni said...
Jan. 18, 2015 at 5:46 pm
I agree with nelehjr!
nelehjr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2013 at 11:48 pm
Really liked this. You took three hiakus and slapped 'em together right? The rythem and imagery are great, however, I think you accidentally placed your title as the first line. NOW SHOW YOURSELF ANONYMOUS FEIND!
writer3499 said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 9:09 pm
Really loved this! Great job capturing the moment!
DragonMaster66.6 said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 10:45 am
ummm... This is a nice poem and all but it's not a haiku
NoniDoni replied...
Jan. 18, 2015 at 5:47 pm
I half agree! check out my work!
NDeflip said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:53 am
Sick poem! I felt like i was in a stromy night!
Kdominick11 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:49 am
I like how i felt like i was actually there.
Dia.dreamer replied...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 9:37 am
I felt the SAME!! except this is not a haiku.
dia.dreamer replied...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:27 am
oh wait, it is a haiku! except you typed the title of the poem along with it...
samantha13 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:45 am
This is a really good poem! It gives me a good picture :)
nancy19 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 11:43 am
Good poem! It was very descriptive
Eric D. said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 9:17 am
Coool Poem!
karinaaaxo0 said...
Apr. 14, 2010 at 8:46 am
I like your poem. It has good imagery.
Alyssa(: said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 5:49 pm
I love this! It flows great and it paints a picture in your mind and I also love it because you can relate to it!
Bandgeek16 said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 8:27 pm
This paints a very good picture. Nice job!
Coreezy said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 1:21 pm
I liked all the description in your poem. It painted a picture in my head.All pretty good you migt want to try and make it flow because it was a little choppy.
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