A stormy Night

September 8, 2009
By Anonymous

A Stormy Night
Lightning lights the sky
Locked in my room terrified
Thunder rolls on by

Looking out window
Terrified of what comes next
Wish for good night sleep

Dawn slowly rises
The country air blows softly
And brings with it spring


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Yld777 SILVER said...
on Feb. 21 2017 at 7:33 am
Yld777 SILVER, Tirana, Other
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nice one !!!!!!111

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 5:47 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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I half agree! check out my work!

NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 5:46 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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I agree with nelehjr!

on Aug. 7 2013 at 11:48 pm
nelehjr DIAMOND, Lingle, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Really liked this. You took three hiakus and slapped 'em together right? The rythem and imagery are great, however, I think you accidentally placed your title as the first line. NOW SHOW YOURSELF ANONYMOUS FEIND!

on Aug. 19 2012 at 9:09 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

Really loved this! Great job capturing the moment!

on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:27 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

oh wait, it is a haiku! except you typed the title of the poem along with it...

on Jul. 20 2011 at 9:37 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

I felt the SAME!! except this is not a haiku.

on Nov. 15 2010 at 10:45 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

ummm... This is a nice poem and all but it's not a haiku

NDeflip said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:53 am
NDeflip, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Sick poem! I felt like i was in a stromy night!

Kdominick11 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:49 am
Kdominick11, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I like how i felt like i was actually there.

samantha13 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:45 am
samantha13, Saugus, Massachusetts
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This is a really good poem! It gives me a good picture :)

nancy19 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:43 am
nancy19, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Good poem! It was very descriptive

Eric DeMeo said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 9:17 am
Eric DeMeo, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Coool Poem!

karinaaaxo0 said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:46 am
karinaaaxo0, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I like your poem. It has good imagery.

on Jan. 31 2010 at 5:49 pm
Alyssa(: PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe that everything happens for a reason. People change so that you can learn to let go, things go wrong so that you appreciate them when their right, you believe lies so you eventually learn to trust noone but yourself, and sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together."
— Marilyn Monroe

I love this! It flows great and it paints a picture in your mind and I also love it because you can relate to it!

on Nov. 6 2009 at 8:27 pm
Bandgeek16 BRONZE, Grandview, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you think your too small to be effective, you've never been in a dark closet with a mosquito."

This paints a very good picture. Nice job!

Coreezy said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:21 pm
I liked all the description in your poem. It painted a picture in my head.All pretty good you migt want to try and make it flow because it was a little choppy.


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