My Texas

September 8, 2009
By tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray


Horses out yonder
how i yearn for their freedom
Texas, my Texas, Dear home.
Hair blowing in breeze
grass gently brushing my legs
Texas, my texas, sweet home.
cowboys tip their hats
i politely nod hello
Texas, dear texas, MY home.



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on Dec. 14 2011 at 2:45 pm
HollywoodHotshot BRONZE, West Chester, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"There is a fine line between fishing and standing at the shore like an idiot." -Steven Wright
"Even a genius can run into doors." -anonomys

Omg, this is a perfect description of Texas! It makes me homesick!

on Feb. 10 2011 at 8:47 am
sierra_nicole13 GOLD, Corpus Christi, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
It may be hard now, but in the end everything will be perfect.

:) this makes me think of when me and my friends are down in Matagordia, by the coast, sitting in the breath and watching the birds fly by.

Really good job!


tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 6:58 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

haha that was a miss count and a miss word :) thank you for pointing that out to me :)

on Jan. 9 2010 at 1:08 am
DeadlyPoppy PLATINUM, Chehalis, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Is mayonnaise an instrument?" -Patrick, Spongebob Squarepants

Having lived in Texas eight years I can relate to the poem, and it was very well written, but why are the lines 5, 7, 7 instead of 5, 7, 5? Sorry, I don't mean to criticize, it really is a very good poem.

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 3:28 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

why thank you

on Sep. 25 2009 at 5:22 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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very good haiku




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