My Texas

September 8, 2009
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Horses out yonder
how i yearn for their freedom
Texas, my Texas, Dear home.
Hair blowing in breeze
grass gently brushing my legs
Texas, my texas, sweet home.
cowboys tip their hats
i politely nod hello
Texas, dear texas, MY home.

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HollywoodHotshot said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 2:45 pm
Omg, this is a perfect description of Texas! It makes me homesick!
SierraNicole This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 8:47 am

:) this makes me think of when me and my friends are down in Matagordia, by the coast, sitting in the breath and watching the birds fly by.

Really good job!

DeadlyPoppy said...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 1:08 am
Having lived in Texas eight years I can relate to the poem, and it was very well written, but why are the lines 5, 7, 7 instead of 5, 7, 5? Sorry, I don't mean to criticize, it really is a very good poem.
toriLou replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:58 pm
haha that was a miss count and a miss word :) thank you for pointing that out to me :)
Jennifer B. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 5:22 pm
very good haiku
Tori G. replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 3:28 pm
why thank you
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