Weather of the West

September 8, 2009
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Tumble weeds tumble
As twisters roar over fields
Mother Nature's fury

Rodents seek shelter
Holding each other tightly
waiting for sweet peace

Sunlight breaks through clouds
Birds sing their beautiful song
Mother Nature's grace

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CianaBThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 5 at 11:19 pm
I really like this poem! It's simple, yet it flows well and hold a lot of meaning. Could you possibly check out my writing? I would really appreciate it! Again, good job!
Egyptiangirl13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 19, 2010 at 6:39 pm

wow!! i love this!! awesome job-just really well written and fun to read-it flows together sooooo well!!! please check out my first Hiaku that i've posted on this website: True love is when...

i appreciate all comments and ratings!! P.S. ur poem is the best set of hiakus i've read on here!

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