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You spin in diamond
Pale as the snow you came from
Spring sends you away

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NathanB said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 5:03 pm
Great Imagery! Please look at some of my stuff.
 
G.Spangler said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 9:17 pm
This was really good, the picture just adds to the imagery. Great work! :)
 
bullseye575 said...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 11:42 am
that was a good little sory the hicus are the best
 
Merrdestm said...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 11:29 am
I like this one because of the writers creativity.
 
Dr.Acula said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 11:24 am
I love this Haiku :) But the word Diamond kind of through me off, because I always through it could be three syllables :p but I still liked it.
 
htrae22 said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 9:00 pm
amazing i didnt lok at the title till  the end and at the end i was like wow she is talking about a snow angel then it was like wow i was right
 
aKa MiSs KraZii(= said...
May 6, 2010 at 1:19 pm

This iz cool, i like it! :-D


 
Niccole C. said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 4:19 pm
I like it a lot
 
hotpink_girl200 said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 7:53 pm
sweet simple and beautiful
 
samantha.rose replied...
Sept. 7, 2009 at 7:09 am
of course its simple... its a haiku poem.
duh.
 
Girl-Writer replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 11:01 pm

I thought these comments were supposed to be positive and constructive ;) Nice work Elizabeth. A very nice haiku - could I make a few pointers?? I'm going to anyway...

Try and create the meaning of the poem so that it skimms below the surface of the writing.

But anyway I think it's great!

 
Ramna said...
Aug. 14, 2009 at 1:31 am
Very nice. Class all the way. Read my work? Please don't hesitate to comment. Thanks.
 
babe892 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 7:22 am
The title of this reminded me of the Elliott Smith song "Snow Angel", so in reading it, I was almost expecting something similar just because the title sort of called that to mind. And let me tell you, I wasn't disappointed. Short, simple, to the point, but very poignant.
 
Samantha G. said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 9:20 pm
great haiku
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 26, 2009 at 1:13 am
Simple so simple! but soooo soooo beautiful...
 
Angel*music*lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2009 at 5:24 pm
I really love how you can say what you want to in little words. it is perfect!
 
Melinda L. said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 12:00 am
that was sweet and simple. nice job!
 
KeepLiving replied...
Jun. 22, 2012 at 9:39 am
haikus always get to me. I always find myself puzzling over hidden meanings and reading inbetween the lines. You told so much with so few words, I love it!
 
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