Leaf Haiku

June 5, 2009
By iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."


Dead leaves on the ground
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken



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on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:16 pm
Garbage!!!!!!

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on Mar. 28 2011 at 9:38 am
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

on Feb. 12 2011 at 8:15 pm
Kamilah Bakari, Duluth, Georgia
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Perfection in three lines :)

on Jan. 21 2011 at 1:46 pm
swimster16 SILVER, Dexter, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I think music in itself is healing. It's an explosive expression of humanity. It's something we are all touched by. No matter what culture we're from, everyone loves music.
~Billy Joel

Very visual!!! I love how you go very deep with just that kind of space!

Eqrider SILVER said...
on Jan. 12 2011 at 5:35 pm
Eqrider SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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Wow! very concise,visual, and flowing!

kekkkkk said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 1:00 pm
so can i.

on Oct. 3 2010 at 8:25 pm
warriorsfan711 SILVER, Plant City, Florida
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mashpotaoes are amazing

This is amazing i love it, and can completly relate with it.

on Sep. 18 2010 at 10:25 pm
kiranwhy BRONZE, -, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Hold fast to dreams
For when dreams go
Life is a barren field
Frozen with snow
(Langston Hughes)

I like it...

on Jun. 16 2010 at 9:44 am
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

thank you for all the encouragement! it really helps!

on Jun. 15 2010 at 10:12 pm
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
33 articles 1 photo 378 comments

Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

I love the comparison, such great form!  Don't stop writing!  And if you have time, I really wouldn't mind if you commented on some of my work.  ;)  You have uch talent in so few words, 5 stars.

-Rose


on May. 2 2010 at 5:46 pm
funnythewayitis SILVER, Redmond, Washington
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I love it. A wonderful simile that I often think about leaves believe it or not.

juliannaa said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 11:51 am
juliannaa, Saugus, Massachusetts
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I really like this, it caught my eye and I thought you did a really good job. It really goes together. :)

on Feb. 19 2010 at 9:52 am
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

hi. i did check out your work before. Great Job!!!!!!!!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 10:34 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

I absolutely adore this haiku! this is my favorite haiku in all the world. kudos to u. check out my work? i suggest Heart On Fire or Just Because

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:39 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don't suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it."

wow this is absolutely wonderful. so beatifully simple. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/


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