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Leaf Haiku

Dead leaves on the ground
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken



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ashbash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 7:59 pm
okay, who ever is putting these gross and unnecessary comments on my poem, STOP! Teenink is for constructive critisism, not this bull. knock it off.
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 5:03 pm
I think you might be able to delete comments, since you're the author, right?
 
ashbash This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 8:22 pm
Nope. I want to, but the most I can do is request that the site removes them. And I did a few months ago.
 
IamtheshyStargirl replied...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 4:57 pm
Dang. :/ I guess you'll just have to ognore them. 
 
manny aguilar said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:06 pm
I eat poop. Would you join me? See my chocolate colored face. Lick my face.
 
loonlyman replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:08 pm
i would lick ur face! just tell me where you live
 
Roy Prieto replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:11 pm
count me in 2 we will have a foursome
 
Natalie Saucedo said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:53 pm
I poop a lot :P
 
loonlyman replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:02 pm
wtf is wrong with you people??
 
gaga said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:51 pm

u lames omg lol

 

 
Jesus Garcia said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:46 pm
I write more better in sleep I awsome!!
 
Andr3wdar34p3r replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:54 pm
oh wow dude, hi larious
 
Jesus Garcia replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:58 pm
I lonely *.*
 
Roy Prieto said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:34 pm
just kidding it suck
 
Jesus Garcia replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:46 pm
I poop a lot! :)
 
manny aguiliar replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:49 pm
you don't poop as much on me
 
Roy Prieto said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:32 pm
You're wrong! This is good, my iliterate friend.
 
Roy Prieto replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:33 pm
*Illiterate
 
roy P said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:32 pm

SUCKS JK

 

 
manny aguilar said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:16 pm
Garbage!!!!!!
 
56498464 said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 9:38 am
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