Leaf Haiku

June 5, 2009
By iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."


Dead leaves on the ground
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken



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Randamu said...
on Sep. 20 2011 at 3:02 pm
Randamu, Helendale, California
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       5 stars :D 

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:03 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

I think you might be able to delete comments, since you're the author, right?

on Aug. 29 2011 at 5:02 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2216 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity.
~Amoniel

"Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'"
~Thesilentraven

I decided to read haikus today, yours is the first, and well-deserving of it's number one rating :) 

It conveys quiet sadness.


on Apr. 19 2011 at 4:40 pm
Daniosopuppy BRONZE, Sarasota, Florida
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They say love is in the air so... I hold my breath till my face turn purple."-Lil Wayne

Okay seriously if you don't like it hop off. I think it's really good. So take your stupid comments somewhere els(: 

on Mar. 28 2011 at 7:59 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
36 articles 1 photo 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

okay, who ever is putting these gross and unnecessary comments on my poem, STOP! Teenink is for constructive critisism, not this bull. knock it off.

Roy Prieto said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 5:11 pm
count me in 2 we will have a foursome

loonlyman said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 5:08 pm
i would lick ur face! just tell me where you live

on Mar. 28 2011 at 5:06 pm
I eat poop. Would you join me? See my chocolate colored face. Lick my face.

loonlyman said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 5:02 pm
wtf is wrong with you people??

Jesus Garcia said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:58 pm
I lonely *.*

on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:54 pm
oh wow dude, hi larious

on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:53 pm
I poop a lot :P

gaga said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:51 pm

u lames omg lol

 


on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:49 pm
you don't poop as much on me

Jesus Garcia said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:46 pm
I poop a lot! :)

Jesus Garcia said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:46 pm
I write more better in sleep I awsome!!

Roy Prieto said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:34 pm
just kidding it suck

on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:33 pm
*Illiterate

on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:32 pm
You're wrong! This is good, my iliterate friend.

roy P said...
on Mar. 28 2011 at 4:32 pm

SUCKS JK

 





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