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Leaf Haiku

Dead leaves on the ground
Just like dreams I used to have
Trampled and broken




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ashbashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 7:59 pm:
okay, who ever is putting these gross and unnecessary comments on my poem, STOP! Teenink is for constructive critisism, not this bull. knock it off.
 
IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 5:03 pm :
I think you might be able to delete comments, since you're the author, right?
 
ashbashThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 8:22 pm :
Nope. I want to, but the most I can do is request that the site removes them. And I did a few months ago.
 
IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 4:57 pm :
Dang. :/ I guess you'll just have to ognore them. 
 
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manny aguilar said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:06 pm:
I eat poop. Would you join me? See my chocolate colored face. Lick my face.
 
loonlyman replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:08 pm :
i would lick ur face! just tell me where you live
 
Roy Prieto replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:11 pm :
count me in 2 we will have a foursome
 
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Natalie Saucedo said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:53 pm:
I poop a lot :P
 
loonlyman replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 5:02 pm :
wtf is wrong with you people??
 
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gaga said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:51 pm:

u lames omg lol

 

 
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Jesus Garcia said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:46 pm:
I write more better in sleep I awsome!!
 
Andr3wdar34p3r replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:54 pm :
oh wow dude, hi larious
 
Jesus Garcia replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:58 pm :
I lonely *.*
 
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Roy Prieto said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:34 pm:
just kidding it suck
 
Jesus Garcia replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:46 pm :
I poop a lot! :)
 
manny aguiliar replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:49 pm :
you don't poop as much on me
 
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Roy Prieto said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:32 pm:
You're wrong! This is good, my iliterate friend.
 
Roy Prieto replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:33 pm :
*Illiterate
 
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roy P said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:32 pm:

SUCKS JK

 

 
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manny aguilar said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 4:16 pm:
Garbage!!!!!!
 
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56498464 said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 9:38 am:
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
 
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