Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Disappointment Disappointment By TheNatural, aurora, OR More by this author Shattering my hope of sun Forming mud puddles. « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 14 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Aga-jean S. said... May 22, 2012 at 9:36 pm: Short, simple and Fantastic!!!! is all i gotta say. Nice job :) Report abuse AMAWHI said... May 22, 2012 at 10:11 am: I like this haiku a lot! It reminds me the days that there was rain when I needed the sunshine to make me happy. Good job, I really like it. I t brought me sorrow and memories good and bad. Report abuse DragonMaster66.6 said... Nov. 19, 2010 at 11:35 am: That was very good, and this also brought me disappoinment. Not the haiku itself but rather the haiku. What I'm trying to say is that you chose a good title as well. :) Report abuse nancyyy said... Oct. 28, 2010 at 7:31 pm: Wow! A very strong haiku. In haikus I find it hard to find the right few words, but here they are carefully chosen to describe the rain perfectly. Report abuse GreenLover said... Sept. 14, 2010 at 10:27 am: nicely written. so little words but big meaning. you should check out some of my new work. rate, commet, critize. thanks! Report abuse Blue4 said... Aug. 23, 2010 at 11:34 am: Great poem-so little words, yet such vivid pictures. 5/5 stars! By the way, would you read some of my stories, rate, and critisize? Thanks. Report abuse cmcampbell said... Aug. 1, 2010 at 12:29 pm: I love the idea of rain shattering hopes! I can really see it! Great job! Please check out my article entitled True Blood! :D Thank you Report abuse yazhira_saphira said... Jul. 10, 2010 at 9:46 pm: nice haiku...good meaning.but personally, I really don't like haikus. They're to short to be appreciated.haha. dia.dreamer replied... Sept. 1, 2011 at 1:03 pm : my friend also feels that haiku are incomplete/short. but that's the whole point. to bring lots of meaning into few but powerful words. the rest is upto our imagination. love the haiku. you did a really awesome job. keep writing. :) Report abuse ShenelleCrystalx3 said... Jun. 18, 2010 at 3:14 pm: That was so good ! Don't ever stop writing :) Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u Report abuse Patience97 said... May 5, 2010 at 2:37 pm: I like the way I can relate to your poem. Report abuse ParamoreFan131 said... Mar. 22, 2010 at 8:08 pm: Wow love it :) Fantastic job! Report abuse Chibbie said... Jan. 16, 2010 at 11:50 pm: hey this is really awsome i can tell how much you feel the rain Report abuse Hope_Princess said... Sept. 2, 2009 at 2:47 pm: This has such clear imagery and I could almost see the rain streaming down my windows. Keep writing!