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First Kiss

My smile widens
Your lips pressing onto mine
Wishing not to end




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Andrew121957 said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 3:20 pm:
Awesome! :P
 
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Dolly9471 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 2:02 pm:
Love this. So true!
 
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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 7:58 am:
Just like a first kiss is~ Very sweet
 
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tatertot1311 said...
May 31, 2011 at 7:00 pm:
Beautiful :) so much emotion in three lines!
 
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thedreamer said...
May 31, 2011 at 6:37 pm:
very cute:)
 
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Rcozzone said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 7:50 am:

awesome                       

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Lilybean17 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:43 pm:

Captures the moment! :D

 

 
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danibean11 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:41 pm:
Very nice, a lot of emotion!
 
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purple_panda said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:23 pm:
This shows so much in just one little kaiku. Really well done!
 
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Braids said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 6:08 pm:
this was (like i always say), beautimus:}
 
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DragonMaster66.6 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 11:38 am:
Thats exactly how first kisses are!
 
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BleedingRose said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 10:52 am:
<33333333
Awesome sauce! Very good, loved it! Mind commenting on some of my work?
 
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Love2Write22 said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 3:10 pm:
<333333
 
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Christine M. said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 4:20 pm:
i like...z ...would like to read more
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 4:14 pm:
love it! it's very sweet and although it didn't seem deep, i got a very deep meaning from it :) very simple, yet very good and effective! keep it up! (oh and please comment on some of my work)
 
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:18 am :
I agree.... It keeps one wondering.... Comment on mine please!!
 
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