First Kiss

June 3, 2009
By TheNatural GOLD, Aurora, Oregon
TheNatural GOLD, Aurora, Oregon
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My smile widens
Your lips pressing onto mine
Wishing not to end


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on Apr. 27 at 1:28 pm
bernardosaldivar BRONZE, Grandville, Michigan
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read a haiku about having a first kiss can not relate

maejw BRONZE said...
on Nov. 4 2015 at 11:37 am
maejw BRONZE, Plaquemine, Louisiana
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I agree with this poem because this is how my first kiss went, and that is how I felt. I didn't want it "to end."

on Sep. 26 2012 at 3:20 pm
Andrew121957 SILVER, Rockingham, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger

Awesome! :P

on Jan. 28 2012 at 2:02 pm
Dolly9471 BRONZE, Berkeley Heights, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
In the end will will not remember the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Martin Luther King Jr.

Love this. So true!

on Dec. 15 2011 at 7:58 am
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Just like a first kiss is~ Very sweet

on May. 31 2011 at 7:00 pm
tatertot1311 BRONZE, Johnson, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Dance like no one is watching you"

Beautiful :) so much emotion in three lines!

on May. 31 2011 at 6:37 pm
SweetPolarBearHugs PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"All conflict in literature is, in its simplest form, a struggle between good and evil." - unknown author.
"All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream." - Edgar Allan Poe

very cute:)

Rcozzone said...
on Mar. 4 2011 at 7:50 am
Rcozzone, Atglen, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Always Expect The Unexpected"

awesome                       

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on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:43 pm
Lilybean17 SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Captures the moment! :D

 


on Feb. 10 2011 at 2:41 pm
danibean11 BRONZE, North Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"OOPS, wrong password!"

Very nice, a lot of emotion!

purple_panda said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:23 pm
This shows so much in just one little kaiku. Really well done!

Braids SILVER said...
on Dec. 6 2010 at 6:08 pm
Braids SILVER, Gibsonton, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
its not all about the mountain, but to the ant running across your shoe

this was (like i always say), beautimus:}

on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:38 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

Thats exactly how first kisses are!

on Mar. 17 2010 at 10:52 am
BleedingRose PLATINUM, Frederic, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
*The darkness holds infinite possibilities.

(mine)

<33333333

Awesome sauce! Very good, loved it! Mind commenting on some of my work?

on Feb. 23 2010 at 9:18 am
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

I agree.... It keeps one wondering.... Comment on mine please!!

on Nov. 27 2009 at 3:10 pm
Love2Write22 SILVER, Pryor, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Begin at the beginning and go on till you reach the end; then stop."

<333333

on Sep. 10 2009 at 4:20 pm
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
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i like...z ...would like to read more

on Sep. 5 2009 at 4:14 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

love it! it's very sweet and although it didn't seem deep, i got a very deep meaning from it :) very simple, yet very good and effective! keep it up! (oh and please comment on some of my work)




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