First Kiss

June 3, 2009
My smile widens
Your lips pressing onto mine
Wishing not to end

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bernardosaldivar said...
today at 1:28 pm
read a haiku about having a first kiss can not relate
maejw said...
Nov. 4, 2015 at 11:37 am
I agree with this poem because this is how my first kiss went, and that is how I felt. I didn't want it "to end."
Andrew121957 said...
Sept. 26, 2012 at 3:20 pm
Awesome! :P
Dolly9471 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 2:02 pm
Love this. So true!
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 15, 2011 at 7:58 am
Just like a first kiss is~ Very sweet
tatertot1311 said...
May 31, 2011 at 7:00 pm
Beautiful :) so much emotion in three lines!
thedreamer said...
May 31, 2011 at 6:37 pm
very cute:)
Rcozzone said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 7:50 am




Lilybean17 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:43 pm

Captures the moment! :D


danibean11 said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:41 pm
Very nice, a lot of emotion!
purple_panda said...
Jan. 19, 2011 at 1:23 pm
This shows so much in just one little kaiku. Really well done!
Braids said...
Dec. 6, 2010 at 6:08 pm
this was (like i always say), beautimus:}
DragonMaster66.6 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 11:38 am
Thats exactly how first kisses are!
BleedingRose said...
Mar. 17, 2010 at 10:52 am
Awesome sauce! Very good, loved it! Mind commenting on some of my work?
Love2Write22 said...
Nov. 27, 2009 at 3:10 pm
Christine M. said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 4:20 pm
i like...z ...would like to read more
dreamer_believer said...
Sept. 5, 2009 at 4:14 pm
love it! it's very sweet and although it didn't seem deep, i got a very deep meaning from it :) very simple, yet very good and effective! keep it up! (oh and please comment on some of my work)
PoetLaureate07 replied...
Feb. 23, 2010 at 9:18 am
I agree.... It keeps one wondering.... Comment on mine please!!
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