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Forbidden Fruit Haiku

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Looking for beauty
Sees it hanging over him
The Forbidden Fruit



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ItsallboutMEThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 28, 2013 at 8:39 pm:
This is beautiful! Excellent work!  ~Please check out some of my work. 
 
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girly21 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 22, 2012 at 10:54 am:
I like it! It's so…… original :P Check out my stuff?
 
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dragonfly95 said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 8:57 am:
this is strongly written,forbidden fruit... wow!check out my work please and thank you
 
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IamtheshyStargirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 29, 2011 at 12:52 pm:

Pretty :]

 

 
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MizzCizz said...
Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:18 pm:
gosh, this is sooo short and means nothing but it is soooooo strong! x love it. write more :D
 
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*StandardToaster* said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:41 pm:
great job i love this. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/
 
*Jade* replied...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 8:19 pm :
even though you got first and i got second im proud to say im glad you did better this poem is amazingly awsome! keep writing!
 
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ChowD This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 3:24 pm:
i love how the words 'forbidden fruit' bring so much to the picture.
 
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This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 9:55 am:
That's pretty! It's very original.
 
Mikey^_^ replied...
Nov. 3, 2009 at 4:40 pm :
thank you! it means a lot
 
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trying2fitin said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 4:14 pm:
that is amazing. i love haikus its all i write
 
warriorsfan711 replied...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:06 am :
Same Here!
 
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