Looking for beauty
Sees it hanging over him
The Forbidden Fruit
Sees it hanging over him
The Forbidden Fruit
girly21
I like it! It's so…… original :P Check out my stuff?
dragonfly95this is strongly written,forbidden fruit... wow!check out my work please and thank you
IamtheshyStargirl
MizzCizzgosh, this is sooo short and means nothing but it is soooooo strong! x love it. write more :D
great job i love this. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/
ChowDi love how the words 'forbidden fruit' bring so much to the picture.
said...Sept. 18, 2009 at 9:55 am:
That's pretty! It's very original.
trying2fitin said...
Sept. 4, 2009 at 4:14 pm:
Sept. 4, 2009 at 4:14 pm:
that is amazing. i love haikus its all i write
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