Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Haiku > Forbidden Fruit Haiku Forbidden Fruit Haiku By NamezTJ, scottsville, NY More by this author Sees it hanging over him The Forbidden Fruit « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 12 comments. Post your own! Report abuse ItsallboutME said... Jul. 28, 2013 at 8:39 pm: This is beautiful! Excellent work! ~Please check out some of my work. Report abuse girly21 said... Apr. 22, 2012 at 10:54 am: I like it! It's so…… original :P Check out my stuff? Report abuse dragonfly95 said... Mar. 31, 2012 at 8:57 am: this is strongly written,forbidden fruit... wow!check out my work please and thank you Report abuse IamtheshyStargirl said... Oct. 29, 2011 at 12:52 pm: Pretty :] Report abuse MizzCizz said... Dec. 3, 2010 at 1:18 pm: gosh, this is sooo short and means nothing but it is soooooo strong! x love it. write more :D Report abuse *StandardToaster* said... Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:41 pm: great job i love this. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/ *Jade* replied... Feb. 20, 2010 at 8:19 pm : even though you got first and i got second im proud to say im glad you did better this poem is amazingly awsome! keep writing! Report abuse ChowD said... Nov. 24, 2009 at 3:24 pm: i love how the words 'forbidden fruit' bring so much to the picture. Report abuse said... Sept. 18, 2009 at 9:55 am: That's pretty! It's very original. Mikey^_^ replied... Nov. 3, 2009 at 4:40 pm : thank you! it means a lot Report abuse trying2fitin said... Sept. 4, 2009 at 4:14 pm: that is amazing. i love haikus its all i write warriorsfan711 replied... Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:06 am : Same Here!