Burnt

June 2, 2009
By Connor Stubblefield SILVER, Woodburn, Oregon
Connor Stubblefield SILVER, Woodburn, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Love is like the sun
You can never get too much
But you might get burnt


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on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:18 am
Maddie_Rae PLATINUM, Newalla, Oklahoma
20 articles 8 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
I write my life in ink, that way i can still remember the good things, and yet i can never erase my mistakes.

Loved it! Shrt and sweet, and yet its deep and meaningful!

on Mar. 3 2012 at 2:13 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Very cool---kinda reminded me of when Icarus flew too close to the sun too. 

on Dec. 29 2011 at 12:01 am
writetrk BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
The role of a writer is not to say what we all can say, but what we are unable to say. ~Anaïs Nin

I love this, it's so a concise descriptions yet it lacks nothing in depth. Bravo :)

on Dec. 28 2011 at 8:10 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

*Sigh* so true~

Harebelle GOLD said...
on Aug. 16 2011 at 4:15 pm
Harebelle GOLD, Vancouver, Other
14 articles 1 photo 121 comments
wow, this is really meaningful. Great job!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 10:00 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

Inspired by yours, I started reading more haiku and I wrote one recently - check it out. (and my other poems too)

on Jul. 5 2011 at 10:59 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

i'm new to haikus too. but this one was really, really touching and so perfectly described! keep writing more!

on Mar. 17 2011 at 5:19 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
1 article 1 photo 250 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

Absolutely love it. I'm kinda new to the whole haiku poem thing, but so far i enjoy it. i really enjoyed it.  :D

By the way, You can't have a rainbow without rain. I hope you do keep sliding down your rainbow without any splinters !!!!!!!!!!!


Photo_97 said...
on Jan. 6 2011 at 6:49 pm
Photo_97, Ct., Connecticut
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Short and sweet :) it rocks-keep it up

11MaTa said...
on Dec. 14 2010 at 3:28 pm

AWWWWWWW I WUVVVV ITTT!!!!!!!but......make it longer (said in a evil wispere)

 


IDENTIFY said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 8:36 am
IDENTIFY, Middletown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"be who you wanna be "

THAT WAS SUCH A INSPIRATIONAL POEMM

on Nov. 19 2010 at 11:43 am
DragonMaster66.6 BRONZE, Washougal, Washington
1 article 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and hear the lamentations of their women" -Conan the Barbarian-

Well good. Hopefully this smooth road will continue in your life :)

Just remember there was never a good day without a bad one


on Aug. 23 2010 at 5:22 pm
Connor Stubblefield SILVER, Woodburn, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments
i posted a new article. its called "its addicting"

on Aug. 23 2010 at 5:10 pm
Connor Stubblefield SILVER, Woodburn, Oregon
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments
hey guys... thanks so much for your support. i mainly write when im going through rough times and my life has been pretty smooth lately. poetry means so much to me and when people like it, it makes me feel even better about myself

halls SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2010 at 8:39 pm
halls SILVER, Harrison City, Pennsylvania
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments
2 words LOVE and IT

LoveKills GOLD said...
on Jun. 10 2010 at 5:27 pm
LoveKills GOLD, Niantic, Connecticut
14 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
And people say we wear tight jeans and dye our hair. That doesnt mean we can't scream or make loud noise.

All the way man. All the way

krysten SILVER said...
on Jun. 4 2010 at 12:47 am
krysten SILVER, Weiser, Idaho
9 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
Smile now or smile later, but remember the pain you hide, will only grow greater.
*krysten*

totallllly true! <3 it!

BMMSKC said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:53 pm
DITTO...:)...LOVE IT!!!!

Paul13 said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:45 am
Paul13, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 3 comments
Its a good haiku because its all true about love.......

on Jan. 12 2010 at 8:56 pm
sasssgirrrl22 PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
29 articles 0 photos 267 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Giving up is not a part of my vocabulary."
"Don't let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."
"Truth be told I miss ya, truth be told I'm lying."

<3333 this.

i put little symbolz 2a end of mine like

....................




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