Love is like the sun
You can never get too much
But you might get burnt
You can never get too much
But you might get burnt
Burnt
Madelyn H. 
Loved it! Shrt and sweet, and yet its deep and meaningful!
beautifulspirit
Very cool---kinda reminded me of when Icarus flew too close to the sun too.
writetrkI love this, it's so a concise descriptions yet it lacks nothing in depth. Bravo :)
Harebelle
hanging_girl_666Absolutely love it. I'm kinda new to the whole haiku poem thing, but so far i enjoy it. i really enjoyed it. :D
By the way, You can't have a rainbow without rain. I hope you do keep sliding down your rainbow without any splinters !!!!!!!!!!!
Dia.dreameri'm new to haikus too. but this one was really, really touching and so perfectly described! keep writing more!
Inspired by yours, I started reading more haiku and I wrote one recently - check it out. (and my other poems too)
CRAZYcubanSOLE
11MaTa said...
Dec. 14, 2010 at 3:28 pm:
Dec. 14, 2010 at 3:28 pm:
AWWWWWWW I WUVVVV ITTT!!!!!!!but......make it longer (said in a evil wispere)
hey guys... thanks so much for your support. i mainly write when im going through rough times and my life has been pretty smooth lately. poetry means so much to me and when people like it, it makes me feel even better about myself
Well good. Hopefully this smooth road will continue in your life :)
Just remember there was never a good day without a bad one
LoveKills
KrYsTeNIts a good haiku because its all true about love.......
B+Attar56hey nice haiku. so i tried submitting mine but it says it must be more than a 100 characters how did you get yours to work
<3333 this.
i put little symbolz 2a end of mine like
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i put little symbolz 2a end of mine like
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