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Hesitation


Shaking like a leaf
I await a stronger wind
My awakening

Apprehensively,
I gaze to greener pastures
Fear pecks my conscious



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dakotawright said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:51 am:
I loved the imagery of the words you used!
 
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xBaByGiRrL22xThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 8:24 pm:
OMG. this is amazing
 
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AmberRose said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 6:13 pm:
This is great!!! Please comment on some of my work!!! :) I would love your opinion!
 
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*StandardToaster* said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:43 pm:
nice this is real good. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/
 
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sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 8:51 am:
I can just SEE someone peering nervously around a corner. Good imagery!
 
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EESHA-CHARYYA said...
Jan. 1, 2010 at 8:38 pm:
OMG as im reading this im picturing as if someone's waiting for the next big thing to come by & hit them & as they're waiting they jus starre at whats ahead of them.
if i got it all wrong im sorry but thats what i see; awesome amazing job keep up the good work
 
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