June 2, 2009
Shaking like a leaf
I await a stronger wind
My awakening

I gaze to greener pastures
Fear pecks my conscious

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dakotawright said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:51 am
I loved the imagery of the words you used!
Julianna.SThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 11 at 7:57 am
I agree. Nice job! I'll check out more of your work. On another note: Check my new story out! teenink.com/nonfiction/personal_experience/article/970096/The-Girl-of-the-Deep-Sea-of-Corfu/
xBaByGiRrL22x said...
Mar. 9, 2011 at 8:24 pm
OMG. this is amazing
AmberRose said...
Apr. 2, 2010 at 6:13 pm
This is great!!! Please comment on some of my work!!! :) I would love your opinion!
*StandardToaster* said...
Feb. 11, 2010 at 9:43 pm
nice this is real good. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/
sammyso3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 8:51 am
I can just SEE someone peering nervously around a corner. Good imagery!
Jan. 1, 2010 at 8:38 pm
OMG as im reading this im picturing as if someone's waiting for the next big thing to come by & hit them & as they're waiting they jus starre at whats ahead of them.
if i got it all wrong im sorry but thats what i see; awesome amazing job keep up the good work
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