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By Rachel S., Healsburg, CA

     Ink trails, rage, love,
Tangoing violently
Across blistered wall




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on Feb. 3 2011 at 8:33 pm
Brittany12 SILVER, Lakeville, Massachusetts
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this is one of the best haikus i have read! :)

on Dec. 21 2010 at 12:18 pm
CoolBreeze PLATINUM, Winnemucca, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
The fear of death follows from the fear of life. A man who lives fully is prepared to die at any time. ~Mark Twain

Wow this is awesome

on Dec. 2 2010 at 6:46 am
ericas2113 SILVER, Congers, New York
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hahahahaha

on Jul. 31 2010 at 5:08 pm
BlackAngelWings PLATINUM, Venice, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
New Moon - S. Meyer
'I flung my leg over the edge and ram through the knee deep water, it sprays all around me. "Edward!" I yell knowing it is useless. The crowd is too loud and my voice is breathless with exsertion. But I couldn't stop screaming.'

God it's just a Haiku!!!

Pearlcr BRONZE said...
on Jul. 15 2010 at 8:09 am
Pearlcr BRONZE, Bhopal, Other
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nyc!!!...its ....meaning ful

on Jun. 14 2010 at 12:02 pm
thezebrasgray PLATINUM, Taylorsville, Utah
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amazingly amazing

thewetone said...
on May. 24 2010 at 12:27 pm
thewetone, Saugus, Massachusetts
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wow i jus got wet reading this!!

Nyrihaz said...
on Apr. 26 2010 at 9:50 pm
Nyrihaz, Isabela, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Listen to the screams a silent room makes"

Wow, very good description on so few words.

RaV3n said...
on Apr. 14 2010 at 8:55 am
RaV3n, Saugus, Massachusetts
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Good use of vocabulary and in a constructive manner.

Girl-Writer said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 10:39 pm
Wow. This is truly a perfect and original example of such a simple haiku. Definitely a 5 star - great work Rachel!

Paul13 said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:48 am
Paul13, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Its a good kaiku because it describes whats going on in life...

on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:40 am
lilsweetcake95, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Draw a line and live above it.

I like this one because it decribes and tells about graffiti. This is how people feel and express themselves.

on Feb. 16 2010 at 5:21 pm
JackieSutton BRONZE, Brownsburg, Indiana
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This is really original & creative! i think its amazing, good job. :)

on Feb. 11 2010 at 4:29 pm
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down." Kurt Vonnegut

This is intense! I love it.

on Dec. 12 2009 at 7:57 pm
bamboom212 PLATINUM, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"The truth with a bad intent, is worse than any lie you can ever invent."
"You are smarter than you think. You are stronger than you look. You are braver than you feel."

nice. very creative. gr8 job :)

on Dec. 3 2009 at 9:48 pm
lilcrazyshygirl BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"A wise girl kisses but never loves, listens but never believes and leaves before she is left." -Marylin Monroe

short bt great love itt!

on Oct. 14 2009 at 4:55 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

Amazing. Very unique and descriptive.

on Sep. 10 2009 at 4:22 pm
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
2 articles 1 photo 20 comments
i used to live in the city i completely love




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