Ribbon MAG

April 30, 2009
By Anonymous

that ribbon of flesh
curves hairless behind your ear
let me tickle it



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on May. 10 2016 at 5:28 pm
ambivalent GOLD, West Bend, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

absolutely lovely

on Dec. 16 2013 at 9:48 pm
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
216 articles 11 photos 52 comments
What does this mean? Though I can't understand it, I believe this has a deep meaning.

on Apr. 21 2012 at 9:17 pm
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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Even though I didn't fully understand, I still think it was great :)

on Mar. 8 2012 at 5:59 pm
DoodleCakes5 SILVER, South Of Carson City, Nevada
5 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Breathing is for the weak." - Coach

I didn't really understand this, can someone explain it to me?

 


on Aug. 23 2011 at 8:59 pm
Makaila. SILVER, Mondamin, Iowa
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
No one has more fun than crazy people!

I understand it and I love it. Keep writing, you're wonderful. Chech out my stuff too!

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:47 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
10 articles 0 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." - Michelangelo
"I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am." - Sylvia Plath

I didn't really understand this haiku. Can someone explain what it means?

SkyBlue said...
on May. 5 2011 at 10:00 am
let me tickle it? what? what are you trying to say?

on Apr. 13 2011 at 10:32 am

I'm not feeling this one. Maybe you could do some work on it? I don't know, maybe I just don't get it. I did grow up different from everyone but maybe your poetry is different in America.

Double D Out!


on Sep. 5 2010 at 9:15 pm
LovelyBlackWisteria BRONZE, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Johnny Cash, Man in black, "Well there's things that will never be right i know, and things need changing everywhere you go, but til we start to make a move to make a few things right. You'll never see me wear a suit of white."

very nice. good job!

on Apr. 26 2010 at 3:05 pm
inspire.identity. PLATINUM, Ajax, Other
23 articles 8 photos 98 comments

This is really cute !

I love it soo much !

Keep writing ! (:

Check out some of my work pleasee xD



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