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Monster with a Good Message

May 10, 2018
By AKANKSHAS BRONZE, Pune, Other
AKANKSHAS BRONZE, Pune, Other
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At the memorable fire ball sunrise
I and the trainees were on the rope with rise and fall on either side
After fierce and brutal training for year
It was time for three to die and one to survive

An excellent warrior with strict principles
Our warrior teacher Alexo said-
“One commander and three die,
Commander’s victory and dead see the immortal galaxy”

Beautiful Lisa had to fight with Jack, an avid traveler
Both fought with spirits of fire and swords immortal
I had to fight with Charlie, who was a writer
With minds as fast as gravity and tricks as tricky as time

Jack and Charlie left for the immortals with reverence
Finally, it was strength against tricks
Tricks won over strength and Lisa too took off
Now, I was the commander and Alexo the happiest

But this happiness didn’t last long when Flatoro came
Flatoro, a monster who’s blood changed according to his mood
Was a former trainee but left midway, no one knows why
After conquering different galaxies it was our galaxy’s turn

With his transparent skin and golden blood indicating a vision of victory
He defeated Alexo and drank his medical blood
Only I was left to protect the land
We both now had a vision of victory that was not so far

Flatoro now had platinum blood indicating that he would bravely fight me
Flatoro like a true warrior stabbed me and threw me into the ice cold water
But I didn’t freeze, my wound began to heal, that’s when I remembered
You will only attain invisibility when you need it the most

Thus Flatoro died with sapphire blood indicating anger
That’s when my life totally changed as I found his diary
Covered with sapphire blood and red sunlight falling on it
I read the diary-

“You have hearts of steel but no feeling or tears
You just killed your friends to gain power
I left because I couldn’t kill those diamonds
They taught me things that no could teach me in a lifetime”

That’s when I realized
We were fighting like blind warriors not knowing who are we killing
We were fierce on ground but returned home like childhood friends
They taught me lifetime lessons and made me strong

Now I had power but felt powerless
I had power but no friends
So next time I made all the four trainees commanders
But I will never forget-
I took power and in return gave away diamonds

 
 


The author's comments:

Sometime to achieve something we lose people who helped us get there. When we gain power, thats when we realise their importance. Always value and respect those who held your hand when no one ready to, who stood beside you even at your worst situations. 


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