Dreamland

April 10, 2018
By Icey5105 GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
Icey5105 GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments

There is a place,
Among the stars,
Over the rainbow,
And I look for it from afar.

A place called Dreamland,
Where wishes come true.
It shimmers brightly,
As all dreams do.

It helps grant one’s deepest desire’s,
When they make a wish,
To the night sky,
And it brings them only bliss.

It’s a beautiful palace built on hope,
With a stunning queen,
She is graceful and humble,
And caring as can be.

She works hard to help others,
And vanquish the places our doubts lurk.
Though she tries to do as much as she can,
She does not do all the work.

You see this queen grants strength,
And love too,
But in the end,
It’s up to you.



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Icey5105 GOLD said...
on Apr. 30 at 10:12 pm
Icey5105 GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
10 articles 1 photo 4 comments
Thank for the compliment, and the constructive criticism! I'll keep that in mind for next time!

karisuna GOLD said...
on Apr. 23 at 2:56 pm
karisuna GOLD, Pinellas Park, Florida
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The flower that blooms in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of them all." -The Emperor, Mulan

Nice imagery! "Desire" should be left by itself.




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