A puddle (the second one)

March 19, 2018
By arelifreeman BRONZE, Toronto, Ontario
arelifreeman BRONZE, Toronto, Ontario
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  Could drink with my eyes

I would never be thirsty

Again, I saw a puddle

And it was perfect.


From a metre Away

It was cool to the touch, the way it rippled

(When it was touched) 

I never saw my reflection in it

I never bothered to 

Look, I just want to enjoy it from afar.


Glass, but

Fluid, flowing



The author's comments:

I saw the clearest puddle I have ever seen in my life about a month ago, and I could not stop thinking about it. I was awestruck, for lack of a better word, and wanted to write about before I forgot what it looked like. 

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