Fire.

October 17, 2017

She is only a flame.

I am a dangerous fire.

But she is still the one..

Your heart desires. 






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lasombraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 23 at 1:21 pm
see this one I enjoy, especially because of the comparison between fire and personalities. however, I feel like this could be a much longer poem. it seems like a small piece of something bigger. I feel like... like its incomplete, theres more to the story.
 
hope.b replied...
Oct. 26 at 12:37 am
That is the kind of vibe I wanted to go for. Since the last line states that the "flame" was chosen over the "fire". Thank you for the feedback!!!
 
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