Fire.

October 17, 2017
By hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"She is water. Soft enough to offer life, tough enough to drown it away." -rupi kaur


She is only a flame.

I am a dangerous fire.

But she is still the one..

Your heart desires. 



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hope.b GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2017 at 12:37 am
hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
11 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She is water. Soft enough to offer life, tough enough to drown it away." -rupi kaur

That is the kind of vibe I wanted to go for. Since the last line states that the "flame" was chosen over the "fire". Thank you for the feedback!!!

on Oct. 23 2017 at 1:21 pm
lasombra SILVER, Indian Land, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"helping one person doesnt change the world, but for that one person, the world changes." - unknown

see this one I enjoy, especially because of the comparison between fire and personalities. however, I feel like this could be a much longer poem. it seems like a small piece of something bigger. I feel like... like its incomplete, theres more to the story.


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