Autumn

October 17, 2017
By hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"She is water. Soft enough to offer life, tough enough to drown it away." -rupi kaur


We were beautiful like the fall.

Suddenly, you built a wall against me.

Because like autumn, we were lying.

Nothing is beautiful when it's dying. 



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hope.b GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2017 at 12:34 am
hope.b GOLD, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"She is water. Soft enough to offer life, tough enough to drown it away." -rupi kaur

This poem was to reflect a toxic relationship. Both parties of the relationship know that it isn't good for them , but they can't bring themselves to end it. That is why the relationship is "dying". Thank you for the feedback! :)

on Oct. 23 2017 at 1:25 pm
lasombra SILVER, Indian Land, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"helping one person doesnt change the world, but for that one person, the world changes." - unknown

okay, I think you may have some relationship issues going on. this poem definitely gives me a sense of sadness and despair. like youve given up hope.


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