October 17, 2017

We were beautiful like the fall.

Suddenly, you built a wall against me.

Because like autumn, we were lying.

Nothing is beautiful when it's dying. 

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lasombraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 23 at 1:25 pm
okay, I think you may have some relationship issues going on. this poem definitely gives me a sense of sadness and despair. like youve given up hope.
hope.b replied...
Oct. 26 at 12:34 am
This poem was to reflect a toxic relationship. Both parties of the relationship know that it isn't good for them , but they can't bring themselves to end it. That is why the relationship is "dying". Thank you for the feedback! :)
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