Broken Relationship

October 11, 2017
By Dark_Moon117 SILVER, Chamberlain, South Dakota
Dark_Moon117 SILVER, Chamberlain, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
"You call it music, I call it my therapist" - NF


I’m questioning whether or not I actually need you
I just wanna be freed from you
Is it you, or the anger and jealously?
This may not be the perfect melody
But it sure lets me explain how I feel
I don’t think what we have is real
You say you care, but where is the evidence?
I don’t think the small problems have enough emphasis
Because that’s what’s killing me
Walk right past me, without acknowledgment
You could read this entire poem and it still wouldn’t be competent
Everything seems to fly over you, and you don’t seem to understand
I just wanted some of your time but it felt like to much to ask
Every day I wait to hear you admit that you don’t care
If trust is paper, you made it crumple and tear
Yet here I am, still willing to give it away
Maybe that’s why I’m always left in dismay
Trying to get the attention of someone who’s disinterested
Bet you were all along, but I was too dim witted,
To actually see and notice,
That I was just a distraction from your focus
On your last relationship
Now I can hardly get a grip
So forget it, I feel like I’m done
You smile and have fun
And I suffer just trying to get your attention
Think I’ve snapped, don’t know if I can go back
You continue to break me like a relentless attack
So I guess I’ll give up, I’m tired
Think I’ll let go of my desire,
For you, and search for something I actually require


The author's comments:

This is a follow up from the last poem I posted. It's about the same girl, but I couldn't continue trying to be friends with her. I essentially "snapped" when I saw she was in another relationship. I couldn't hold in my anger and frustration any longer. It became clear to me she didn't really want me around anyway. So I made this poem, and I sent it to her. And with that, I let her go. Or cut her off. However you wanna see it. (I suck with titles, so if it's not a good one, yeah...lol)

Also, I censored a couple of things, because in the original....I cut myself loose. 


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on Oct. 26 2017 at 6:07 pm
Dark_Moon117 SILVER, Chamberlain, South Dakota
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You call it music, I call it my therapist" - NF

Thank you, that means a lot. And I'm glad you enjoyed it

slew_14 SILVER said...
on Oct. 26 2017 at 11:49 am
slew_14 SILVER, Haymarket, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
it is better to be alone then in bad company - George Washington

This was so good,quite similar to my own work.I feel so much of what you have described in this!


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