The Paved Black Road

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Leaves laugh in the breeze of outside
Playful kids run and scream joyously
No care in the world
Loving life
Along the paved black road.

A faint breeze blows
Shifting the air
And this room
Unlit by man, alive by the sun
It has already changed
The paved black road

It cannot reach here
Nor do I think it fair
For them to be out there
And I in here
From the paved black road

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DuckLoverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:56 pm
Wow. This is great! I have often felt kept from that tempting 'black paved road'. I think this poem does a great job of capturing the attention of the reader. I loved the word choice, and the subject as well. Awesome work!
Peffer replied...
today at 7:08 pm
Thanks :) glad you liked it!
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