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Each water
Is another
Of the way I will miss
     this place
As each plink
Lands on my forehead
and I blink,
The world around me changes
to a different hue.

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addictwithapenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5 at 2:46 pm
The description in this poem is lovely. My only problem is that it’s unclear what you mean by “the world around me changes to a different hue”. Overall you succeeded in creating a mood and expressing your emotions. Keep up the good work.
Jellybean said...
Aug. 4 at 1:11 pm
This poem is beutiful. It seems way to often that society can take away the things we take for granted. Friendship for me is the scariest. You know someone for years, watching each other's highs and lows, and then suddenly they are gone. Keep on writting girl, cause one day, me and the special lady who inspired us will be in line to have you sign our copy of your inspiring book ;)
igobyamy replied...
Aug. 4 at 4:51 pm
omigod i love you so much this is the sweetest thing!!
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