5 Reasons Why Home is a Person

June 1, 2017
By AlleeRProctor PLATINUM, Hedgesville, West Virginia
AlleeRProctor PLATINUM, Hedgesville, West Virginia
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Room 1- The carpet floor is so grey it matches the cigarette smoke. The white curtains are turning into a pale yellow.

 

Room 2- This is the hallway you raised your middle finger to my dad. He shoved you out of his way and walked out the door.

 

Room 3- There is a purple picture hanging on the wall. Very few people know that picture is covering evidence that dad use to punch things.

 

Room 4- I slept in here with you until you made me sleep in my own bed so other men could lay beside you. I wasn't ready to sleep by myself yet.

 

Room 5- The Barbie house is set up in here, and I use to always wish that there was some magical way I could live in it. I eventually realize that I did. Everything about the house I live in is plastic, and it would never be home.



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on Jun. 6 2017 at 3:54 pm
AlleeRProctor PLATINUM, Hedgesville, West Virginia
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Thank you so much for commenting on my work! Apologies for replying back so late. I will do my best to answer your question, but I also have a question for you. What does "home" actually mean? Comfort? Because if home is comfort than I feel more comfortable around some people than I actually do in my own house. I hope I answered your question. Thank you, again for replying.

on Jun. 4 2017 at 8:46 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

Interesting! Love your use of diction and imagery to get your point across. I'm curious if this is a real situation in your life - seeing your home as a person? Regardless, good job!


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