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I don't care
I don't care if you can use fancy wording and phrases
Metaphors personification similes
Whatever language device you use
Millions of details and adjitives
I don't care
Because you're hiding
Behind the language
What the meaning is. What the story is
What the feeling or the thought or WHATEVER
Is.
Please stop hiding it.
I get it. You can write. Now stop writing and start speaking. It can still be typed up. Just SAY something.
I'm getting sick of reading nothing, 






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G.M.2021 said...
today at 4:55 pm
I totally understand what you are saying. Words can sound pretty with all of the rhyming, and lengthy words, but without feelings or emotion... they are nothing. You must live out the words you say. Please keep writing and take your own advise. -The Stranger That Doesn't Know You But Can Relate :)
 
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