judgement

May 15, 2017
By Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I always wonder why birds stay in one place when they can fly anywhere around the world. But then I ask myself the same question."


You took off your glasses because you were intimidated

you figure that if you cant see them stare you'd feel better

so you blindly live your life thinking people will judge

and though some will

little did you know i was admiring you


The author's comments:

you, reading this, you are beautiful.


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Spambi SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2017 at 11:49 am
Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Never change for someone else, change for yourself.

Punctuation errors..

on Jun. 5 2017 at 6:55 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 DIAMOND, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@Izzy777 So sad, but beautiful at the same time! I love the line that FuriouslyHappy pointed out, which gave a plot twist to the poem. I love using the concept of the glasses that gave the idea of the man blinding himself from seeing others in God's eyes. Here is the link for my article: TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=17&thread_id=92145&rand=0.747746677041504#reply2197996

on Jun. 5 2017 at 3:45 pm
FuriouslyHappy BRONZE, Paris, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way through life is to be FURIOUSLY HAPPY!!!"

If you want you should read my free verse poem "Wounded Heart".

on Jun. 5 2017 at 3:44 pm
FuriouslyHappy BRONZE, Paris, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way through life is to be FURIOUSLY HAPPY!!!"

I love it. "Little did you know I was admiring you." It's very beautiful! :)


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