Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989


Under the moon
Under the stars
We realized what we are
We were free
You loved me
But now youre gone
But I cant go on
I guess I´m am done

Join the Discussion

This article has 1 comment. Post your own now!

addictwithapenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 10:12 am
Remember to use apostrophes in contractions, so “can’t” and “you’re”. Use only “I am” or “I’m” in the last line, because having “I’m am” is repetitive. This is a good start to a poem. I would recommend expanding it to illustrate how exactly the speaker is “done”. The ending seems a bit abrupt, and adding more about the speaker’s feelings could remedy that.
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback