The Kiss MAG

March 17, 2009
By Lilliputian GOLD, Anacortes, Washington
Lilliputian GOLD, Anacortes, Washington
19 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want to fool the world, tell the truth." -A Friend


Women remember the first kiss, men remember the last. – Anonymous

Holding back, don’t want to rush
Take a breath, no need for a fuss
Gravity, doing its job
Pulling us together, our walls come undone

A pause, he’s making sure
Timid smile, we’re alone in this world
Hesitation, we’re both new at this
Anticipation, a moment we don’t want to miss

The kiss sends me spinning
My head starts reeling
My heart starts pounding
As my body starts shivering
Sparks start flying
Fireworks exploding
Time stops ticking
Eternity is growing
In a kiss
In the kiss

Pulling back, to catch some oxygen
No doubt we’ll do it again
Nervous, don’t want things to change
At least not in a bad way

Another moment, breathe back again
Lean in to kiss me again
Comets dance across the skies
Sighing, I close my eyes

The kiss sends me spinning
My head starts reeling
My heart starts pounding
As my body starts shivering
Sparks start flying
Fireworks exploding
Time stops ticking
Eternity is growing
In a kiss
In the kiss

Fireworks exploding
Everything changing
Heart racing
Eternity growing
In a kiss



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on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:00 pm
this is great....... like one of the best poems i've read........ keep up the good work

on Aug. 3 2010 at 11:20 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

captured the sense of intimacy, read some of mine?

on Jul. 21 2010 at 9:11 am
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
14 articles 1 photo 32 comments
This is beautiful. You're very talented. All of your writing is excellent!

on Aug. 25 2009 at 12:27 am
dancedreamer101 GOLD, Severna Park, Maryland
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my heart totally melted when I read this....you're a great writer.

on Aug. 18 2009 at 6:07 pm
RoxxaneMayhem BRONZE, Paterson, New Jersey
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
this quote was said by Chris Jericho he said people who bring you down have failed in life and when you realize it he was right i thank you plenty

i really love this poem it has so much emotion its one of the greatest poems i ever read

jazzymusic6 said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 3:00 am
i like your poems ,they seem real nad i hope you can post another one

on Aug. 7 2009 at 4:13 am
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
9 articles 4 photos 45 comments
This is beautiful! I enjoyed it! Amazing job! very passionate. I love it. God Bless!: D

on Aug. 1 2009 at 9:36 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
23 articles 5 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

(Happy face) :) thats beautiful with i knew the feeling!

on Jul. 26 2009 at 2:05 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
71 articles 2 photos 180 comments
i think this is now one of my most fave poems of all time...

peaceshaina said...
on Jul. 22 2009 at 10:28 pm
This is an amazing poem!!! Love the details!!

on Jul. 22 2009 at 12:24 am
Pink_Butterfly, FC, Other
0 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never say there is nothing beautiful in the world anymore. There is always something to make wonder in the shape of a tree, the trembling of a leaf."
- Albert Schweitzer.

I really enjoyed this poem good job !

on Jul. 20 2009 at 1:59 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
55 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

I hope that my first kiss is like this...it sounds so magical. It'll be awkward and timid, like you said, but a memory I'll never forget. Keep writing, you're doing great!

on Jul. 10 2009 at 8:10 am
Crazzzy_Megan GOLD, Ventura, California
12 articles 0 photos 6 comments
I love this poem, keep up the great writeing=]

on Jul. 1 2009 at 5:41 pm
Lilliputian GOLD, Anacortes, Washington
19 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you want to fool the world, tell the truth." -A Friend

Thanks guys! Love the positive feedback. But just for the record, this was 100% pure imagination. It was actually a spinoff of a song called "The Kiss" by Karmina... you should check it out. So I haven't had my fireworks exploding moment yet.



Cheers!

-Northwest

on Jun. 29 2009 at 11:07 pm
LakeTownGirl GOLD, Lake Stevens, Washington
13 articles 17 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over. Smile because it happened." -Dr. Seuss

i thought this was amazing. I wish my first kiss had been like that. It wasn't even close.... dang... i must be missing out haha

(o.0) said...
on Jun. 29 2009 at 7:45 pm
awesome and sweet...i havent had a 1st smooch but it sounds incredible...keep writting

on Jun. 29 2009 at 5:00 pm
Vindictive_Love BRONZE, Abq, New Mexico
1 article 5 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence wins championships.
Michael Jordan

Whatever you do in life, will be insignificant, but it's very important that you do it.
Mahatma Ghandi

that was cute. i remember my 1st and this is relative lolz keep writing

on Jun. 27 2009 at 11:49 pm
##FeelingDeep##, Pleasanton, Texas
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You are amazing! You really captured the feeling and mood of a kiss when you find that special someone. Whatever happens keep writing poems...Looking forward to read more..your friend,##FeelingDeep##

LIKEwhoaa GOLD said...
on Jun. 26 2009 at 9:34 pm
LIKEwhoaa GOLD, Carrollton, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 126 comments

Favorite Quote:
The important thing is this: To be able at any moment to sacrifice what we are for what we could become.
-Charles DuBois

i love this poem! its so cute, nice work :)


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