April 7, 2017
By Vell3900 SILVER, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
Vell3900 SILVER, Pewaukee, Wisconsin
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My baby's brothers hair is soft and silky like a baby’s blanket. The side of his head is where his hair is the smoothest. Sometimes when I rub my fingers through his hair, it's like rubbing my hand through a bucket of bird feathers. He has medium length, black hair, but when he gets out of the shower, his hair curls up and has a scent of a beautiful spring day. My baby brother has the best type of hair in the family. 

On the other hand my hair is rough like steel wool. My hair feels like the texture of a short carpet, uninviting and uncomfortable  At night the side of my head, my hair curls up into little, tiny hair balls. My hair looks like a bunch of ants having a meeting on top of my head. When people touch my hair you can honestly hear the sound of my hair because it is so rough.  My hair, my hair is rough, uninviting and takes work to get it to look presentable.

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