Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Wings

I know you are hurting
So am I
You're wings are broken,
Borrow mine.
I want to see you shine
And spread your wings
And fly.
You are beautiful darling
So keep your head held high.
I want you to know
That I care.





Join the Discussion

This article has 1 comment. Post your own now!

hwoodruff98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9 at 9:53 pm
First, a few mechanical edits: -Line 1 should end with a comma -On line 3, it should be "your" -On line 8, it should be "... you are beautiful, darling," (two added commas) Over all, I think this is short, simple, and sweet. Well done.
 
bRealTime banner ad on the left side
Site Feedback