Don't be afraid

March 2, 2017
By Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never change for someone else, change for yourself.


Don't be afraid be brave,you have all you need all you must need and all you could ever want..

Don't let them hurt you,Not like your friends stay strong be strong..

Keep your heart,keep it closed..closed to hurt closed to pain,but open to love and understanding.

Don't let them be right defy the odds,and live like you shall..Life is a never ending circle of pain and hatred..but it is also a beginning to something beautiful,embrace the pain embrace the wonder,but do not loose yourself..Do not let Religion define you,let yourself shape on your own mold.not someone elses.



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on May. 16 at 1:44 pm
WolfWhisperer0911 DIAMOND, Crosby, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"For I command you, be brave and steadfast! For the Lord your God will be with you whenever you go."
-Joshua 1:9

"Throw me to the wolves, and I'll return leading the pack."- Unknown

"Never moon a werewolf." -Mike Binder

@Spambi Great job on the poem!

on May. 14 at 3:35 pm
Shrivastava SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself no matter what they say

And you commented on my poem that I do capitalization errors (such an irony)

Spambi SILVER said...
on Apr. 11 2017 at 11:34 am
Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never change for someone else, change for yourself.

Alright thankyou for your advice!!

on Apr. 5 2017 at 11:30 am
Bronwyn-Sophronia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
318 articles 10 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

I like this a lot. I do think you should change how you have it laid out, just a little bit. Like this, for example: "Don't be afraid, be brave,(enter) you have all you need, all you must need, (enter) and all you could ever want.."Otherwise, it's awesome! Maybe try your hand at more descriptiveness as well! :)

Spambi SILVER said...
on Mar. 16 2017 at 1:49 pm
Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never change for someone else, change for yourself.

@Hannajuana I know I think teen ink kind edited it.

on Mar. 16 2017 at 12:33 pm
-Pancake- SILVER, Grants Pass, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Bullies drink loser juice" Gerard freaking way

I like it, but um some capitalization errors. Annyywaays, I think it's smart if that makes sense...hm.

Spambi SILVER said...
on Mar. 13 2017 at 11:55 am
Spambi SILVER, Alsea, Oregon
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never change for someone else, change for yourself.

If anyone has questions feel free to ask and I will answer




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